'Veu Da Verdade' Cover

Cover for a sci fi romance in Brazil

i dont now who in the press will color this one, so i send 2 versions, one in pencil and one in inks (digital ^^)

hum, my spaceship desing its a crap, and i dont like the "midle east" man, but i like the couple, like how tey poses and costumes come around... the weapons are not "real" weapons, but they are basead in real ones...

hope ya like, C&C welcome

Edit:
make some changes in all the draw, specially in te back guy's face
sorry my poor english